Slogging through edits for Ivy & Gabe, Flame Again, book three in the Bandit Brothers Series, when I come to a scene where Gabe is getting himself, ready to enter Ivy. You know, as they do in romance books. And as he grabbed the lube from the nighstand–my editing came to a crashing halt.

I recalled one of my betas had left me a note, “Oh…when he lubed up there, I thought they were going to have anal.” I don’t want to disapoint readers, espeically not my betas, so I rewrote the scene.

Only to have it dawn on me that it wasn’t this scene. It was further along in the book. All well, I guess that can be Bonus Scene for later.

It’s our zillionth day of rainy and grey here and my hands are almost too cold to type. If you want to read a bonus scene, Harper’s Punishment is availible here.

Getting back into those edits now and drinking tea.

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