Tag: Flame for Chance
It’s defintely and finally Spring in these parts because the first sighting of a mama bear and her cubs happened today! And it reminded me of this snippet from Flame For Chance. Finn has taken Sasha to his cabin and she’s a city girl (see below). I am furiously writing away on Kayleigh and Erik’s story and I think I’m enjoying it a little too much. For those interested, there is a pre-order up for it, here.
Flame For Chance, Bandit Brothers Book #5 is out! And thank you so much for making this a fantastic, amazing release!
I’m sharing a this teaser from Flame For Chance, where Finn kisses Sasha for the first time after he gives her what she needed……below…keep reading.
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Hope you have a great start to your week! And you enjoy this teaser from Flame For Chance.
Her pouty lips parted, and he slid his thumb to her chin, pressing down gently.
“How do you feel?”
“Good,” she wiggled on his lap.
“Satisfied?”
“Mostly,” she smiled.
He was going to dream about that small sly smile.
“What would make you feel more satisfied?”
“If you kissed me?”
She didn’t have to ask again. His lips brushed against her mouth, his tongue found hers, and he probed it gently, urging her to open.
She did, and the sweet taste of her flooded his brain. The fierceness with which he wanted this woman surprised him.
She made the sweetest little whimpers, and Finn deepened the kiss, loving her sweet taste.
He broke off the kiss, hugging her against him. “You took your punishment very well. Say ‘thank-you, Sir.’”
Sasha scowled. “Thank you, Sir,” she bit out.
Finn laughed. “You’re welcome, Sasha.”
“What happens now?” She asked. She traced his face lightly, the pads of her fingertips warm.
“We can get together and play soon if you want.”
“Yes, I do,” Sasha said.
“All right. Text me and let me know your schedule,” he eased her off his lap. “Would using your vibe make you more satisfied?”
Her breath hissed. “Your cock in me would give me what I want.”
“Next time, little pet,” he said. “Good girls get orgasms. And good girl spankings.”
“I want that,” Sasha said.
Finn stopped himself from throwing her on the bed like he wanted. But he needed to take this slow.
Instead, he pushed a stray strand of hair behind her ear. “Good night, Sasha.”
“Night, Sir.”
His heart swelled at hearing that unprompted from her lips in that soft, breezy voice.
“Good night, little pet,” Finn kissed her forehead. “Lock your door.”
Sasha nodded and closed the door.
Finn waited until he heard the lock click and made his way downstairs.
Outside in the early evening, he glanced at the sky, the sliver of a moon visible. In his car, he sat for a moment, breathing hard.
His heart lurched with a swirl of grief, remembering another sub and another time. But as he started his car, his palm tingled, remembering the feel of Sasha’s flesh under his hand and how, for tonight, she gave way to him, and that put a massive smile on his face and eased the tug of grief. She might be a brat, but tonight he saw glimpses of her vulnerability, making her a challenge he wanted to pursue.
There are two points I come hard against while finishing a book.
One is, knowing when not to touch it anymore. Like, just don’t
Could something be better? That’s a never-ending pile of always. But if I just fix this one word…don’t. Knowing when to “don’t” is hugely important.
Set it to formatting, get it out in the world, and be done.
And the second point is where I ask my betas: “This isn’t even a book. What is this book about?”
Thankfully, I have peers who pat me on the head and say, “You do this with every book.”
We have reached these points with Sasha and Finn and here is something that I realized, with the comments from one of my amazing betas.
I have a thing for the flawed character.
I talked about it here with this post: The Flawed Character Who Doesn’t Apologize, meet Quinn Walsh but it’s taken to this book, book number whatever (still not sure how Sasha and Finn’s book is going to be numbered) to realize that it’s a thing that is through all my books and I like it.
Their flaws don’t get worked out and in the next book where they are mentioned, they are still their flawed selves, even while living their Happy Ever After.
In Flame For Chance, it is Finn Kraweic who has it together.
Okay, his heart is hurting but he pretty much has it together: a secure job, property, got friends, all those things that tend to make up “stability” and it’s Sasha, with her pesky problem of running out the door when things get too tense, uncomfortable or just because there is a door, who is flawed.
And maybe typically, it’d be expected that the Dom has beat this out of the bratty submissive. Sasha is a brat.
Finn is a Dom but he accepts her shortcomings.
I mean, he punishes her for her behaviour (that they agreed to, consensually) but helps her get to a better place to work it out…but she’s working it out. And when I started to worry if readers would accept this, if they’d expect her behaviour to change, for her to stop doing it…I pressed the button to send it to formatting. Because she is working on it…not perfect.
Anyways, Flame for Chance drops soon and I am so thrilled to have the next Bandit Brothers book out!
(soon, soon)